I'm not really seeing enough detail or content, Kelly. You need to make sure that you explain everything linked to research (which you need more of - you've not covered anywhere enough appropriate examples of videos, nor written in enough detail when analysing them) and your developing understanding of the task. You also should demonstrate that you are looking at the blogs being produced by the other members of your group, by commenting on them (and getting them to comment on you). You should also make sure that you post "summative" entries (i.e. what your group has done over the course of the week, for example). You need to make sure that there is a lot more on here.
I'm not really seeing enough detail or content, Kelly. You need to make sure that you explain everything linked to research (which you need more of - you've not covered anywhere enough appropriate examples of videos, nor written in enough detail when analysing them) and your developing understanding of the task. You also should demonstrate that you are looking at the blogs being produced by the other members of your group, by commenting on them (and getting them to comment on you). You should also make sure that you post "summative" entries (i.e. what your group has done over the course of the week, for example). You need to make sure that there is a lot more on here.
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